Reviews for The Smile
j0zz chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
omgomg (tear) that was so sad. i couldnt stop crying. keep up the good work.
peridian chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
You read my story, so i decided to read some of yours :) i really like this one. I like the lesson it teaches and the hope that it brings to me when i finish reading it. It's really good.
sophie chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
that's a really good story. i can relate
Ama-chan chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
Goodness... I really sympathize with you. As cliché as this may seem, I went through basically the same thing at my old school, years ago. Your story reminded me of that, of a pain that no one truly understands until they experience it... A pain that, as you wrote, can move a person to the point of desperation to escape. I understand that completely. Your story, also, gives humanity (or at least a few, rare middle schoolers) a glimmering hope in a dark cave. I wish I'd had your experience. I'm glad you didn't do it, too. This was a good read. n.n