|Reviews for Steam Hidden Soul|
| Impressionist chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
| Bleeding Ink chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
oh wow, this is really cool. I like the descriptions in it. It's too bad I didn't get the meaning in it though.. Too metaphorical to penetrate my stupid mind) It was very, very cool though. good job
| AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
Not bad at all. Nice imagery especially in the first stanza. And I also liked this line "My heady breath fogging up heaven’s glass ceiling." Not bad darlin! I think this is another one of your best that you've written in a while.
| bach-player chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
once again, incrediably sensuous and beautiful!