|Reviews for Dragon Fire|
| GhostWolfWriter chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
Very good! This is Ghost from Neopets. I love it when stories have stories inside them..if you get my meaning...it reminds me of Eragon.
| bokk lover chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
Such a cool story! This person better write a good sequal... fast!
| Galadriel19113 chapter 4 . 3/20/2004
It's getting to be a really good story that one can really get into. A bit confusing in the early part of chapter four...If there is a dragon practically in their back garden, you know? But otherwise, really good. You plan to write more, right?
| Tenlar Scarflame chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
Hello dahling, guess who! Excellent stuff. A little hasty, but you said it was a draft, right? Anywayz... I like. B)
my criticism (don't kill me... please...)
1) I personally don't think Old Sakh would use the phraseology, "the Big Battle". You know?
2) Hm... how rational is Cy, anyway? Personally I'd be at least somewhat understanding if Kito didn't believe me. 'sides, it's not like Kito is saying anything personally AGAINST Cy. So, maybe, if Cy is a relatively levelheaded person, he's be a little more understanding about Kito's... doubt.
anyway, just playin devil's advocate. Like I said, I like it, next chapters plz!
-Tenlar Scarflame, LDU
| Kell Hound chapter 2 . 3/9/2004
great job keep writing