|Reviews for Wild Eyes|
| oranges chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
Thanks for the review and even promoting yourself, this poem is really something. Lots of showing, not telling. I also like that one of the central objects is his ring, when the title suggests it would be his eyes.
I think it appeals to me because it's very similar to the feelings that were in my head when I wrote mine. I try to make myself write about things I might not want to and that one was the first regarding the subject. I want to go beyond what I think is "okay" to talk about. But, this is getting long. Thank you for sharing this poem with me ]
| WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
Very nice. Good message too.