|Reviews for Passionate Prayer|
| killinglights chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
Wow, that was quite, as you put it, sensual.
| Princess of Darkness 72 chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
hehehe...sounds like an orgasm :)
| haunted moonlight chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
sexy, subtle, bold. lovely all around!
| singingspeechless chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
Wow! This is amazing! There is so much imagery! I love it! Please keep writing.
| cmetalangel249 chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
I like it. Very sensual. It's open without being explicit, but subtle without leaving me to wonder what in the world you're talking about. :)
| Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
vivid, sexy. and not cliched! yay! good word choice and sense of movement.
one suggestion, the last two lines a cry, a sigh. i like that internal rhyme. not sure if you meant it or not, but it sounds great. only thing is the 'a' adds a bit of distance. which the rest of the poem doesn't have. not quite sure how to play with it. just something i noticed. (don't worry, i'm still jealous *g*)
| Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Woah... wow. Nicely done! Me likes!
| Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
aw...i love it! :)
| Dancing Waters chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
it's really good, but somewhere in the middle of reading the poem i kind of got lost... like, the connection was cut loose or something...
overall it's wonderful. there's just something in the second stanza... can't figure it out. then again, maybe it's just me.
| katmonkey chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Brilliant descriptions and good imagery.
| EndlessLove4u chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
Really nice...good job!
| katylar chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
Very... image provoking. nice. You accomplished your goals. as always, another excellent piece.
| bree chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
i like it. i like the adjectives.. descriptions. )
| Trinka chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
Just so you know you reached you goal of writing a sensual poem! I really like it keep up the good work!
| ughthisisawful chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
The imagery in this poem is unbelievable. It sounds very...exhausting.