Reviews for The Temple of Pure Water
EriChanHime chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
What rich and vivid imagery! It is a skill to make a reader feel part of a foreign place as emotionally as you have done here. It seems (were I to have any drawing skills whatsoever...) that I could craft a perfect picture of this place. FictionPress has an edit feature now, so perhaps you could go back and add in the proper Japanese romaji characters again; they were lost in formatting. Beautiful piece, dear.
ali leslie chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Hey chickie, I finally got around to your site. I didn't know you wrote fiction! I love your descriptive language-what beautiful images. Be proud!