Reviews for Take Me From This Pain, Kevin's story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So I finally got to this story, and it is great! I would finish it now, but FP is being a pain and it won't load the next chapter for some reason... Urg. It's funny knowing how Trent is in this chapter at this point and how he is in Brian's story, I can't wait til Ryan comes into this one. Be back to read later.~WH |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was good even without the dialogue.. Update soon! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, sorry about the reviewing delay. been a little busy, you know? but, I have to say, every chapter is like a cliffhanger; always bringing you right up to a good part, then BAM! the ending has arrived...it's just so well written! update soon, for my sake? _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() WO! Hey darls... I love the first A/N I totally agree with what u said :-P Poor lee lee least he's got ryan for now |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE YOU! I LOVE Ryan, I LOVE Lee, and I LOVE the way you wrote this. Bliss, bliss, bliss. And your sex is too hot for words! And actually, I had two things to tell you, but I only wrote one in the quiz; the second is that you really made me work on running my chapters together in a 'smoother' style. Ryan is too sweet. Lee is too cute. I'm still swooning like an idiot:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEY! Ryan getting a hard-on in public HEY! Kazza is like my SUPER best friend! She was the one that asked me for you email, now 2 of my friends have become friends! PLUS I didn't tell her, she guessed! O_O Like I do at many times, don't you just LOVE us? THOUGH I STILL WANT TESTMANT TIED TO MY BED! *Cough* Umm... Let me keep that to myself, BYES! _ Say Hi to Darius for me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, poor Lee! Ah well, I'm not THAT sad for him 'coz he has Ryan now! Ryan's in love! Ryan's in love! *dances* I can't wait to read the next chapter...when he announces said love...which leads me to say UPDATE QUICKLY! Awesome chapter! |
![]() ![]() Yay! Lee and Ryan are so cuutee! Update soon~ I wanna see Ryan tell Lee he loves him! - Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah Ryan, prove to yo' man that you love him *cheers them on* |
![]() ![]() ![]() These past few chapters have been so incredibly sweet and endearing. The instantanious chemistry between Ryan and Lee is so CUTE! I know that I have said this so many times before, but you have such an incredible gift for writing and could go so far. Keep this story going! I can't wait for the next chapter. Bravisimo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is soo good. Poor Lee that must have really really hurt ... wel at least he has Ryan now. Cant wait for the next chaptet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool chapter. I like Ryan and Lee. They're so cute together! Yayness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was reading the description of Lee and the things he can do with his mouth **shifty eyes** with my parents in the room. It was strange. I don't have a problem with them knowing I read slash, but them knowing I read ...you know (parent in the room) with be incredibly scary. Ryan needs to confess his love already, goddammit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That chapter was so awesome, I love the fact you didn't use dialogue! It proves you are brillant! Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sque! Yay! This makes me so happy, all these people with guys who love them...makes me feel jealous and lonely, too, but that's besides the point. I absolutely love reading Brian and Kevin's stories; you write the emotion and dialog and action so very well. Thanks for all the quick updates! |