Reviews for Take Me From This Pain, Kevin's story |
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![]() ![]() This totally RULED! Though the truce is a pain to me! I need to fin that Brian chapter,so I'm going to review fully over there! Also I KNEW you LOVE your character and her mate! I'll post it with the 1st chap of the Niko pre-thing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, but I *must know* if it's Lee or Leigh. Tease _ I can't believe it took you 29 chapters to make a typo *is in awe* Kevin is such a sweetie, and I love the way the relationship he has with Jason. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew he was gay... I KNEW IT! Splended chap as usual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for Kev! Yay for Jase! Yay for Ryan! :D Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Leigh? Lee? Huh? I don't get it...should I? Just update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Thanks for updating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good idea to teach Kevin self-defense... Update soon! Can't wait to find out more about "Lee"! lol : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ryan has a boyfriend! Well, it should be a guy...we all know that Ryan's gay...and if not, he should be ;o). Fantastic chapter, update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Lee's a guy. I liked this chapter. And Kevin's finally going to learn to stand up for himself. Yay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suspect as well, although I have the added advantage of seeing how it's all spelt. Always helpful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “You a fag, too?” Mark asked, ignoring the spectacle Tanya was making of herself and focusing on Ryan. “Why? You interested?” “HELL, NO!” Mark screamed. “Good, ‘cause you’re not my type.” Jason and Kevin exchanged unreadable glances, both wondering if Ryan wasn’t making an informal declaration they should be paying attention to. That is a sign I know it! I've read some of JAS work on FF,I've been waiting for her to update for MONTHS! No wonder,I'll go after this! A DATE? U sneaky bitch! _ lol,Going now...BYES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sighs happily* Ryan is too cute. Lee vs Leigh very interesting. I think it's a 'Lee' _ Mark, Eric and Tanya are too awful for words. Hopefully Eric won't come back. Gina's such a good mother to the boys. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh great chapter! But theres one mistake that i like couldnt get my mind off of the whole time (im a little ocd about some things) “Easy, Kev,” Ryan scolded in amusement. “Ryan’s just trying to make sure his sweetheart is okay.” Shouldnt that be Jason? Okay, other than that, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a 'Lee', I bet you! :-) Good times, good times. Cute ending. Good chapter. :-) Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ryan is being a little tense about this...but it's so much more intresting that way. :) can;t wait till Brian's story get's it's update |