Reviews for Take Me From This Pain, Kevin's story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() M... just finished the first story, and now I'm here. Haven't read much, but what I have, I did. P.S. I'm not sure if the last sentence was comprehensible. Regards (Yes, I like alliteration), R.R. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since I have no idea how to address you, I'll just call you Esq: I recently finished reading your story "Take Me From This Pain, Brian's Story". And I think it was really well written, to the point that I finished reading the entire story in a day and plan to work through the sequels one book by one book. The dialogue was touching (and humorous where appropriate), and overall it was simply brilliant. I also like the way you dealt with that flamer. But what really touched me was your author note on the chapter after. It's good authors like you that can change people's lives. Cheers, R.R. |
![]() ![]() ![]() T_T I love u. |
![]() ![]() Just a note to the authors note you left here, there is a "u" in the British and the Canadian spelling of "color", American's dropped the "u" when they left the British Empire. Though Canadian are known to drop the "u" occasionally. But in Canada(newspapers notwithstanding), the most recent version of the Gage Canadian Dictionary has granted the "-our" spellings precedence. And the Ottawa Citizen has returned to "-our". So if that reviewer was Canadian or British they were spelling it the correctly! By the way this story is a serious favorite of mine, I have read it at least 3 or 4 times since you started it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! I loved this story! is that the end...? it can't be the end! it can't! *cries* oh well on to Brain's story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one was good, but I liked Brian's story a little bit better, the characters seem more developed. |
![]() ![]() I have to admit I liked how you wrote this story more than how you wrote Brian's and it's a shame because Brian and Matt are much better characters than Kevin and Jason. The ending to Brian's POV was abrupt and made no sense, which this one at least rounds off the story. I don't really understand how the sequels for other characters makes sense for Brian and Matt? And honestly I don't know how the sequels work after Brian's POV. I just read Kevin's because he's Brian's brother. I'm not much of a Trent fan, so I doubt I'll be reading his POV I adore Ryan so I will be reading his. Looking at your profile it seems you have a whole four story for the main characters that seems fun, so I will be reading that. I understand that both Brian and Kevin have had bad lives and there is drama already made in for them. I also understand as a author you loves these characters and obviously don't want to hit them with more pain. But as relationships, neither of the couples ever fought and to be honest Jason and Matt are real saints if they didn't get annoyed. Yes Jason at the end did, but really they seem like fantasies rather than a real relationship. Overall I did enjoy the story, it's probably not something I'll ever re-read again. But you have a certain flow to your stories and I guess like me a lot of people adore your writings. You are one of the authors here at FP that I hold to some high regard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally got around to reading it and this story is great! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think I should have read this before moving on lol... Just as great as the others :D You should think about getting them published or something :) I'd buy it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't figured out whether i like this story alot. well i do just not as much as Brian's. While Kevin sounds bite sized to he just doesn't have...i don't i think i'm just biased cause Brian's not in it too much. *sigh* it was good time comsuming but good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really nice end to Kevin's story!:) I like this as much as Brian's, they are both so good! So, in wich order do you suggest I read the sequels?:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Enough of that, though. I love how the two stories are so interconnected and things you may not have understood are suddenly remarkably clear when you just skip over. I love Jason. XD I don't know why, but I just do. But, Trent. TRENT. Omigawd, Trent. Favorite. Ah. *fangirl squeal* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story just as much as Brian's. i'll read the sequels as soon as i can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story so far, I cant wait to read it's sequels too. |