Reviews for Take Me From This Pain, Kevin's story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...angsty. Makes you feel all...fuzzy inside. I like that this chapter has returned to it's error-free ways, too... Well, anyhow, I'm off the comp for the night...*sighs* see ya tomorrow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, you certainly did add to the drama :) I'll go check out your friend's stuff as soon as I can |
![]() ![]() HOLYcrap! Kevin can't leave! NO! Jay was being stupid, but he just can't LEAVE! I mean My God! Jay is being way too sensitive! And now poor Kevin feels like crap! HE JUST CAN'T LEAVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jason has such temper. Brian and Kevin are very much alike, and it's pretty sad that they're both lacking in so much self-esteem. Jason has so 'splaining to do! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Write more quickly! I need to know what happens! The suspension! AH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter. i love how they all stick together when a problem happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like happiness! Damnit! Stupid Jason! haha, i still love him! And what's wrong with 'coloured'...i happen to like the spelling...Anyway! Loved it so much. Sad though. And remember HAPPINESS IS GOOD! Update again really soon! |
![]() ![]() DAMN Straight I'm wise! :-D I do hope that thats not the end of the argument... IT'd be good to see them going at it (fighting that is) |
![]() ![]() Oh the drama! I love it! Poor Kevin, but at least he's got all these friends who care about him :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, my 400th signed review:) I'm glad it's going somewhere worthy. It's sad to see them fight/argue/misunderstand one another, but I guess it had to happen eventually and 'what doesn't kill you, will only make you stronger' (you have that phrase in the US, right?). You handled it well, and I'll go and review still-in-the-closet. I know I've read the Miami story but I'm a lousy reviewer so now I'll be good and leave an actual review. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* Stupid Jason. I want to whack him. Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More more more more! Bad place to end this chapter-it's like cliffhanger Hell! hehe. Update before I go insane! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...*blinks* Please tell me that there aren't two n's in *in*...unless you really meant that place people spend the night in...*groans* You were doing to well! Gah! Now I must prepare the Hammah! Oh yeah, that Robert guy? He knows his old English, I'll tell ya that. Colour? _ It is an actually word, means the same as color (duh...but I'm sure that there is SOMEONE out there who didn't know that) and looks more...regal. Regal. That is a favourite word of mine. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Asshole! *runs towards Eric...lots of crashing noises* haha, that'll learn him...hm...moving on! Awesome chapter. Geez Eric is an asshole. I hate him. Good on Mark though, even if it is only for basketball...though could be friendship?...he's still helping my little Kev. and Jas. Go Jason! Kill! Kill! Loved it. Please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very intense. I like that the rest of the guys from the team are finally doing the right thing. I hope Eric suffers, greatly, with whatever type of punishment you can come up with. Can't wait for the next chappy! Update soon! |