Reviews for Gold
narmerguy chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Can you do more than string dark adjectives together? Writing about killers isn't your stuff I guess. It has no feeling. What's so golden about the poem? You think a crazy killer is golden? You've got problems and issues you need to work out.
JinRagnarok chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
A bit disturbing, and graphic considering I know you, but a good poem nonetheless. Good writing DDT. Keep at it, get all taht anger out!
APE chapter 1 . 3/21/2004
wow, deep
Anna-Elaine Castleman chapter 1 . 3/21/2004
This is pretty good, even if the topic is overdone. You took a hackneyed topic and made it your own.
Tk.T chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
You and Hoku-Senpai must've been depressed or something! This poem you wrote is abstract and curiously disturbing in some parts yet good. It sends a delightful chill down my spine. The last line is the clencher, don't you think? Anyway, great poem! Oh yeah, Shi-chan, I've updated UOY so please r&r, ok?
Happy writing!
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 3/11/2004
It is a bit scary, but I like. I love the imagery...