Reviews for Against The World
Cyberknight chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
I found this poem up on the "just in" section, but came back later to review it, 'cause I can see that I didn't the first time.

Anyway, I too like the interesting spacing this unique poem has. It kinda looks like a mushroom cloud.. or a lamp. Yea.. it looks like a lamp on an endtable.

Great job with this "poem". Actually, I don't think it's a poem at all really. It may transcend poetry and become art!
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Holy crap, this was awesome! Your formating is very original but makes the poem that much stronger. I love your lines, and the whole thing just blew me away. Keep up this amazing writing!