| Reviews for Beach Bums |
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   Don't want to chapter 3 . 3/21/2004 hahah that's funny! post more soon |
| princess17 chapter 2 . 3/18/2004 there is absolutely nothing to critise! i love it. u should publish this story. |
| pixy-dizzy chapter 2 . 3/16/2004 *chokes* this...is...hilarious. You...have...one...of the...best...senses of humor...I know! *is still gasping for breath* Yes, my sister was wondering why I started wheezing at the computer. I LOVE the monster-truck-driving grandfather! And the 'bikini uniform'! Yes...I particularly liked that last part. Great job, you! You'd better continue...before I am forced to send you hate mail! nah...I won't do that. I think...0_0 lol, joking. Great job! Update soon! |
| No Life chapter 2 . 3/16/2004 Great story it's really well written can't wait for your update |
| Lyra Torg chapter 1 . 3/12/2004 This is an awesome start. Your summary was really interesting. |
| pixy-dizzy chapter 1 . 3/12/2004 *wipes a tear of laughter* Oh man...this is so funny and random! I love it! Keep writing! |
| Kaida Kaori Knox chapter 1 . 3/12/2004 r u an expert in japanese or something? if you think u r, then try spacing the words out. yes, japanese does have words too, not just really long words that make a sentence. other than that, this is pretty good, could have been better, but has a certain charm to it. i think you should hurry up and post another chapter! ~Kaida Knox |
| Don't want to chapter 1 . 3/12/2004 post the next chapter soon! |