Reviews for Beach Bums
Don't want to chapter 3 . 3/21/2004
hahah that's funny! post more soon
princess17 chapter 2 . 3/18/2004
there is absolutely nothing to critise! i love it. u should publish this story.
pixy-dizzy chapter 2 . 3/16/2004
*chokes* of humor...I know! *is still gasping for breath* Yes, my sister was wondering why I started wheezing at the computer. I LOVE the monster-truck-driving grandfather! And the 'bikini uniform'! Yes...I particularly liked that last part. Great job, you! You'd better continue...before I am forced to send you hate mail! nah...I won't do that. I think...0_0 lol, joking.
Great job! Update soon!
No Life chapter 2 . 3/16/2004
Great story it's really well written can't wait for your update
Lyra Torg chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
This is an awesome start. Your summary was really interesting.
pixy-dizzy chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
*wipes a tear of laughter* Oh man...this is so funny and random! I love it! Keep writing!
Kaida Kaori Knox chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
r u an expert in japanese or something? if you think u r, then try spacing the words out. yes, japanese does have words too, not just really long words that make a sentence. other than that, this is pretty good, could have been better, but has a certain charm to it. i think you should hurry up and post another chapter!
~Kaida Knox
Don't want to chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
post the next chapter soon!
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