Reviews for I Am
beve chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
hey hey hey!this is really good!its so cool!its almost like...dr jekyll and mr hyde.. only better.
love it!
FormerlyKnownAsPhoenix chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
At least I'm not the only one to write depressing stuff... ;)
I love it, it reall rips right through you
Transparent Cherub chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
hey there, fist off thanx for reviewing me, i've read a few of your poems and they are in general quite good. i really like the images and mood created by this one. fav lines: "i am that strangeness pulling you apart, i am the pill you cannot take." nice work.
~jestacy
CynthiaA.Gard chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
love it...
bubblesbeccka chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
oh! i like. deep and yet comforting. i do like this a lot. keep it up
WizardOfWinter chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
O, chilling. . . I like it. The rhyme is good, usually people mess up their whole poem to get a rhyme. I do that sometimes, lol. But it fits well with this poem. Good job!
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
By the senses you lack... I love that phrase. It leaves you thinking. Well done.