I agree with your other two reviewers...you must have felt this before, or you are just a great writer with emotion (Any help would be great!) I've been working on emotion, but can't seem to get it as well as you. R&R!

...Wow. That's really touching. I agree, you have a definate way with emotions. For some reason, I feel like you might have actually had this happen to you. It just feels so real.

You are truely a gifted writer. you manage to take feelings everyone goes through and make them into a beautiful stroy. This was yet again another beautiful realistic story!