|Reviews for pacific|
| floorcollision chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
i love this poem- and most of your other pieces too!
off to continue r&r-ing!:)
| redrussianscorpion chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
"He asks me if coral is a color,
And I tell him to imagine love at sixteen"
Yes, haven't we all?
this lie I feel exzemplifies this bit, your exploration of a more shy, quiet, uncomprimised love of types is nice, and thankfully, not too "poetic".
| Diana chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
I can't remember if you posted this at dA but I love it regardless.
If I could be bothered to sign in, I would add to my faves. I will have to do it later! :)
| vers le sud chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Beautiful narration. Reminds me of e.e. cummings, yet evokes emotion more effectively. Truly talented! Keep up the brilliant work.
| Kez chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
*sniffles* so sad, -teasing-. I loved verse 5: "He asks me if coral is a color,
And I tell him to imagine love at sixteen," and also the constant reminders of the gray ocean, and no (perhaps rising?) sun.