|Reviews for i'd like to say|
| redrussianscorpion chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
having already critiqued this poem on another site (TPS), I won't go into detail, but NOW it all makes sense-afer reading some of you fiction and poetry here, you style isn't quite so "shocking" as other might want to seem, and I can see a progression, a series if you will (think Art/ Photo series) in how you have approached writing. Well done.
| Diana chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
"I hear Haydn better through the curve of your back..."
Man, oh man, oh man... OH MAN!
*sigh* I am in need of such jazz-fuelled love right now! :)
| All Midnight Eyes chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
MM. Wonderful. I love "I'd like to lay my head against these keys when you are playing"
It reminds me of that famous poem, Variations on the Word Sleep, where it says something like "I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed and that necessary."
You write like that. I love it.