Reviews for Tell Me What I Want To Hear
Naede chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
Happiness? heehee just kidding another great poem. *stands and claps* Bravo Bravo. oncore oncore. it is so cool i love your poems they really get to me it is so awesome
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
that's really good, i can relate to it compltely. i would say shange the 'through my head' to 'around my head' and maybe change the sentence 'i had in my bed'; it doesn't seem to fit in with the general flow of the poem, make it longer or more sophisticated. other than that, i really enjoyed the poem
nanima chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Aw! I really can't understand, since I was glad to get out of my old house (my room flooded constantly). A very well-written poem, though. I just got sucked right in! And the end really punched it home, too. So...five thumbs up from me! _