Reviews for Numb
eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Awesome, it flowed really well and the rhyming was good. Nice message at the end. I get tired of all the depressing stuff(of course, that's all I ever write myself so I have no room to talk). Anyways, great poem.
EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
I'm seriously stunned. This was great, especially the way you moved from Numb to Run to Cope to Hope, that was beautiful and the way the words flowed together was great. Sorry but if I continue I'll just sound like a broken record. So I hope your friend turns out all rite and I'm happy that she has friends like you to care so much. Great job, take care, and good luck!
Much love.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Are you always this optimistic? You always seem to have this...light of hope shining through most of your poems. I used to be that way...I guess I still am. Anyways...I really like the way you did that "numb" "run" "cope" "cope" thing. Oh. I just realized that those all rhyme. Oh, I'm a smart, eh? And the "A gradual suicide" part...very good. It's late. I'm bad at reviews anyways. But anywho, beautiful poem. )