|Reviews for Before You Criticize My Beliefs|
| alsdjf chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Sao: I stand by my earlier assessment, you are one of the most devote Christians I know.
Anni: And we don't mean that in a bad way _
~Sao & Anni
| WizardOfWinter chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
I like the whole idea of the work, but I think it would be good if you put in something that would make it seem more. . . hm. . . what is the word? Desperate, i think that it is it. Yeah, make is more desperate in the 1st paragraph by doing things like saying something about them jamming the crown of thorns into his skull. You know, something like that. I, too, am a Christian and I love this work, but it could be a tiny bit better by making it desperate. You might like mine, "God Is Real," but then again I don't know because I had like 10 people review and only 3 liked it, lol.