Reviews for blackness
Zwidon chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
it reminds me of this time i was in a carbaord box in the rain...
Pomeranian-Poufy chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Great job! Not very long yet has as much force on you as one. Cool!
blurgh chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
wow you got me there good jobb
i'm black and white and black and white!
wow
good job
Gypsy Pen chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
wow, scary how i really connected with that one...
Silk Weaker chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Ahh the emotions, your poems all sound angry and sad somehow, but you need to refine it so it's more touching to people who don't feel the same.
dave mclean chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
this is an outstanding display of raw emotion. bravo.