Reviews for Vanilla is not Chocolate
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
*blinks* Woah...I didn't know that anyone else had analyzed vanilla that much.
simple, but SO BLOODY TRUE! I personify everything, and this is definitely how I would personify vanilla.
But if vanilla is not chocolate, is chocolate necessarily the opposite of all the things that vanilla is?
Because I'm fond of chocolate as well, and, depending on the chocolate, I don't think I'd describe it as lying or fake.
Maybe corrupt, but open about the fact!
Bitten Caliban chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
The poem is odd
The poem is what you wrote
The poem is not ignorance
The poem is what you have
The poem is what I read
The poem is what I comment on
The poem is what I like
The poem is originality
The poem bears no apparent sense
The poem is what it is.
N'est pas?
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
This was interesting. Simple. I think the repetition wore on me, so I think you have done better. But it is very philosophical, which I like!
Caveman chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
um, anyone up for choclate?