Reviews for Emptyness
angel chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
this was really good i love how on all of your poems your endings always really catch people. in this poem i liked how you really saw the world through this persons eyes.
Calli-gurl-99 chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
it's good.
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
this is SO me.
I guess everyone thinks that way sometimes, and maybe that's why we became poets!
summerdazed
greenelephant chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
this is a stupid poem. You should really stop writing your no good.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Sometimes I go out and review a whole bunch of poems in hopes of someone reviewing me back and the every so often I find a good poem and this poem is based around misery pain and dispiar I mean what more could I ask for? so basically great job
NurseDelilah chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
very good but ur format is a little off
inky-clyde chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
;.; Once again, sad. But very pretty .
Sara
Raven Dauphin chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Bit depressing really... But you gotta think that all of us feels that way - like a speck of dust in this world. But, I think it helps to know not only you feels that way. Almost everyone of us do, in some time or the other. It helps to write about it. Wishing you'll feel okay soon...
Bre
Caveman chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
short and sweet