|Reviews for Maybe, Just Maybe|
| NJ Is My Home chapter 2 . 1/18/2008
this poem is great for quoting or u kno, like, putting it in your aim profile..i'm not sure which ending i like better, they're both good..great job
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
I think that God wide Universe made thus,
For (S)He had tired of Fate's predictions,
So dull and boring in their set, sure ways,
That (S)He decided All to set loosed free;
¿So who are We to set determined days,
Delimiting Their possibilities,
When into Chaos-Maelstrom Time has spun,
A spider web of delicate choices?
¿Should we not then look for life's turning points,
Where paths adjoin and branch out from our past,
Into those ventures of a future new,
That Necromancy has no spell set on?
For in Indeterminancy's question,
Lie answers to our very soul's questing,
Where all our greatest fears find their quelling,—
Past all our doubts and red Heart's querying.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 2 . 5/5/2004
hum i like the 2 versions with different endings! nice
| Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
i like it! )
| IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
This reminds me of Romeo and Juliet. It's bittersweet!
| Romantic Squirrel chapter 2 . 4/6/2004
there wont always be a someone. This is aood one, I like this ending better
| Unchained Soul chapter 2 . 4/6/2004
I like the second one a LOT better... really great.
| Debbirooni chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
I think both "versions" of this poem works well. I like this poem a lot; it's a big contrast to some of your other poems that I have read. I have never had a "romance", but I know it sucks to know that in your "reality", there would never be a chance. Keep writing
| HFDestinyD chapter 1 . 3/21/2004
Oh okay, this is a great poem! Especially if you read it outloud to yourself. It's got that ...beat-type-thingy going on. The one that makes people say... "wow" i like it.
| Juliet Squared chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
The poem in a whole is super, but I agree about the ending...maybe re-wording or maybe after you say 'but here/there's always someone' you could go into one last hopeful line. It would finish off the poem nicely. The rest of this is fantastic though.
| The intellect chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
yer i agree, its gd, and reminds me of my boyf... but maybe the wording isnt rite at the end?
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
I like the poem a lot and I think the ending is good the way it is. It could be re-worded to fit better but you need something there that implies what this ending implies.
| kikki07 chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
i like the end i thought it was really kool
| Ravynne chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
I like the poem. I don't think the ending is necessary, its sort of implied. Maybe if you reworded the phrase it would fit better?
| karmakaze chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
I know the feeling:)
Keep it up!