Reviews for Please Just One More Kiss
Lailassi chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
This is very cool. I'm not sure what you're doing at the ends of the lines, but I really like it. The subject is nice, and the whole poem takes the old theme of love and adds an entirely new perspective. You even have a few lines that seem to show undercurrents of tension in the relationship, which adds a more subtle, really interesting view to the piece. I like this. Very cool.
Seraphim of the Dark Moon chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
One word - Reow. Great job, I have to say one of your best yet. Astounding improvement and a joy to read. Blessings to you! ;-)
MistrissD chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
So beautiful, i love the rhyming and the desicriptions make it so vivid and so real