Reviews for Just Because You Can
ColdFrost chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
This great. Well written and interesting. The repetition is good, adding effect to the difference of the last line.~ColdFrost
x0x-Still-Alive-x0x chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
That was beautiful! . yup yup...
loulavellena chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
reaction... same as Arutha's...
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
aw thats sweet! id give you a star if i could! a star for great author!
twistedmorals chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
wow that was really wicked awsome! i love the line "if you could reach for a star Would you get one for me" it reminds me of something my best friend bryan said to me. well any way its really awsome. great job! ( darn it. Now you got me thinking about people!) any way keep up the great (not only good) work!
Another author,
-Twistedmorals-
Jennacharm chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I think the line
'would you get one for me'
throws the piece off. But maybe it does that because it's not 'if you could' or would you.
It seems kind of strange that your refrain changes...
Maybe it would improve the poem if you said: If you could love me too much
Would you?
And have that as your refrain.
Just a suggestion;)
lisaslife chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
Wow, Surprise ending, but Good.
EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Aww...that's sweet in a sense and yet harsh in another. I like it because it has a lot of deeper meaning to the questions. It's very nice. Take care, great job, and good luck!
Love,
A-Light-From-Your-Darkness
Arutha chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
That last line really caught me off guard. I like the idea behind that... kinda' eye opening when you get to the end.