I've spend the last 3 days glued to my computer screen. My eyes burn, but I have to say it was worth it.

Though at times I thought I would never want to read another sex scene in my live (god you have tuns of those in this story) I have to say they were good, and what I find to be an increadible plus when reading them they didn't sound like porn.

Sweet story.

This story took me two weeks to read, and even though it's finished I know it goes on. I love it, Thank you for putting it out on the internet for all of us to read. Looking forward to reading the sequel now!

i luv your story and anyone who says otherise should shut it. i read this one mean review that was like saying what loser has time to write this junk. and i thought that peron is stupid cause they said they counted how many sex scenes there were. its like come on get a life, if you dont like the story leave it i looked at what they write. it was about stuff like doing surgery on a vampire. and people who say the story sucked cause of the grammer is just mean. if the author were to edit their long chapters like in this story then they would have to postpone the next chapters and that wouldnt please the the author could do a bit of editing after the story is finished. and i have to say this to the author pink raine if the story sucks that much to you why do you keep reading it? if you just want to flame then go get a life.

This is really good. With some editing it would be novel worthy.

OMG! That was the best story EVER that i read. Sure there was a few spelling errors and it took me 4 days to read. But it was all worth it. And when I mean 4 days of no sleep no lie. That was a very good story, I loved it from begining to end. You had me bitting my nails when I thought Destin was going to die. But I just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed that story and thanx you for writing it. If you want to respond to my message e-mail me at: orangecountyprep54 :Aegale54

I love your writing. I've read most of your stories and I love everyone of them. This story is my favorite although I don't think I'll read the sequel until it's finished because some of your chapters end in cruel cliffhangers. ;)

This is so fabulous! I love the way Armand is Destin's knight in shining limo will be reading more sounds absolutely juicy so far

That was a beautiful ending. I still don't like Val...but...I was crying when Destin was dying. I love this so much...It's wonderful...now...onto more of your stuff!

I have just finish reading all the chapters of this story! I relly love it! I even cried when I reach the 2nd last chapter! I hope you won't mind me only have a review. Because everything I write will be the same. "This story, its amazing!" This is the 1st story of fictionpress I have read when I first know of this site. _ Keep up the good work! I will be reading other stories of yours! But not to worry. I have just sign up an acc and I will leave a review for every chapter of any story you write!

oh my ra... this is the first original story i liked and im hard to please... ever considered a book? i would have liked a tragedy though but i liked it all the some rockon!

Omg...This is the second time i read it and it took me 2 months! last time it took me 4 to read it through straitly. eheheheh anyway, i'm still doing your fan art trying to deal with what armand and destin should look like. I made Destin cross dress about 22 times and i keep thinking armand getting nosebleeds (hahahah) But please be patient! I got's tons of schooling left and im only getting done with Armand, Destin should be done soon! PROMISE! I WILL GET IT DONE!

-Oki3xDoki3 A.K.A Tuyet Nhi

I'm adding you to my favorite stories list so you'll be getting a few of these!(Hahaha!) Sorry!(Hides!) But you know ILove your stories! TTFN! ;)

Ok, I'm sorry if I'm being harsh, but I could barely get through this chapter. Your stories need a lot of work, not only grammar-wise, but plot-wise as well. First off, what about Destin's earlier "I'm not gay" comment? You've completely forgotten that in the story, and seeing as how his and Armand's relationship is moving along, wouldn't that involve some sort of inner conflict? Or some of Destin's feelings on this? And about Destin's feelings: I think you have too much insignificant dialogue in the stories, and not enough of the characters' feelings. The characters turn out quite shallow, and us readers don't get a sense of their personalities. They become boring and dull, and so I find myself skipping ahead past the supposed "plot" part of the chapters to the smut (Yes, I do like that part-but I do like plot even more). Oh, and as for your sex scenes-You mentioned it was your first time writing yaoi, but still-a paragraph or two doesn't cut it. I'd suggest something more drawn out, maybe more foreplay, some descriptions, what's going thru Destin's & Armand's mind when they're doing this and that, so on and so forth. That's one of my main problems I have-just not enough overall personality and feelings.

I know that they're still in the "lust" phase of the relationship, but to suddenly drop Armand's "I'm not in love with him" bit is just so sudden and abrupt. There wasn't any hints of it to the reader, not really. There was lust, and care, but to write that, and then suddenly leave off that subject is really confusing. I don't really know how to explain it, but your plot is bouncing all over the place.

*sigh* Again, sorry, if you're pissed off at the review at this point, but I do find the initial plot kind of interesting-well, actually, I read a bit of Blackmail Love, and got interested in the Armand/Destin pairing from there-& I think if you work on this story a bit more, it'd be a lot better.

WTF?

this was truly an excellent story to read although i did find it rather disturbing and uncomfotable to read at times but this shows just how good it was well done you should think about writing a sequal