Wow I really liked this story so far. It's interesting to think what might happen to Destin soon...

I love it,

though I noticed the story still says it's complete xD

Anyway i got this rec'ed from AFF D And I like it a lot!

Update soon?

Aww, man, I don't suppose you could leave it up while editing? I love going back and re-reading your stories!

Good luck on getting it published though! It's definitely something I'd buy.

I wanted to let you know how much I have really enjoyed your story. You have done a wonderful job of making it feel like it could actually happen and allowing the reader to be able to visualize the story. I hope this story makes it to a publisher, because I will be the first in line to buy it!

I hope you had great holidays this year!

Gravi

I'm glad you decided to repost this!

Amazing work as always! If you do get published, let us know! Good luck!

AMAZINGLY AMAZING! I've read some of your other stories, and I love your characters so much! You truly make them come alive. -

This is such an inspiring story

Oh... Bad Mr. Terrance! Get fed to the sharks goddammit! I love how Destin was 'threatening' Adams... :3

My favorite line of the chapter:

*"Because I've had to deal with a frustrated Armand for three weeks, and for the past two days the man's been less then pleasant to deal with," Adam replied walking back to the sofa. "And it looks as if Destin is as frustrated as Armand."*

Okay, know time for my correctional help!

"Yeah I throw Val out," Armand said looking at her.

You used the wrong tense. It should have been 'I threw Val out,'

Next:

"Ready to go back the room?"

'Ready to go back to the room?"

And:

"but knew that would fad fast."

Should have been: 'but knew that it would fade fast.;

In case you haven't noticed, I'm a bit dazed at the awesome smut... :3

And oh baby baby, mean Armand is sexy xD

B-but Armand is telling/asking Destin to leave? ;A;

I was so relieved to read that Destin decided to stay... (If you haven't realized, I type my reviews as I read.)

Kudos to you for this A.S. story!

Again, time for my correcting! (I'm such an ass :) )

You tend to write 'where' when it should be 'were'.

The only thing my tired eyes have really noticed.

Awesome sauce story still... I love that he's getting married to Armand...

W-wait! H-how could you just block off the rest of the smut? ;A; HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!

I love how Armand always sneaks up on Destin and how Destin acts so timid.

They make a good couple- if they'd stop beating around the bush .

Not to rag, but here:

"I'm sure he's *miss understood* the deal, he doesn't know I don't have any family to go visit."

*miss understood* should have been misunderstood.

Also, something else I notices... You seem to lack detail about their surroundings. You know, what the car looks like, and things like that.

It's not even that big of a deal, I tend to have the same habit (I know I'm a hypocrite)Just thought my input might be useful.

Not to offend you, but I've noticed your grammar skills have receded a little bit. Just try to work on it a little bit, kay? I'm the grammar snot, though...

I still wuv this story though. (Aren't I just a hypocrite?)

Please don't take this as flame, I just think this info might be useful for re-writing the story:

-Armand's kisses where unpleasant, it was just he wasn't use to anyone kissing him.-

The *where* should have been *weren't*.

-"Woman his size does it with men my size all the time."-

*Does* should have been *do*.

-Getting out Armand looked up at the office building and sighed, he hated meetings.-

The comma after *sigh* should have been a semi-colan, I think.

Still a wonderful story... I may have missed a few things though, so keep an eye out.

Oh. My God. This is such an awesome story! YAY! The only problems I noticed, which were considerably minute, is when you put 'to' when there was supposed to be 'too' . I only saw it twice, though. Overall a wonderful story, regardless.

So, I read the whole story and absolutely in love with it. I think you had excellent development of your characters and plot. I was up all night trying to finish it, because i didn't want to stop. The only criticism I have is the numerous errors throughout each chapter; not that they made it hard to read, just that a slightly more finished product makes things flow a little nicer.