Reviews for The 5 senses
Goner chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
This is a good poem. The last stanza kind of gave me pause though. You have Hear, See, Taste, Smell, but the last sense should be Touch. It just could be a personnel thing or just your style (in which case you shouldn't change) but senses aren't really emotions, though I guess one could debate that. Anyway, just my 2 cents. Like I said earlier, it was a very good poem.
katmonkey chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
Brilliant! :)
loveishopeless chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
very good excellent!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
It's a little short, I think, but no the less you conveyed the topic well. good job.
DHABUZ chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
ooh mama !
thats a nice 5 sense poem story type man
i like the part no man i like the whole thing so its in my favs :D
Tharla chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Wow, very powerful poem, heard from a different point of view. I don't think it should be in the "love" category, but that's up to you. A little thing-you forgot the word "to" in the sentence, "just to hear her scream". Definately a great poem, I loved the style in it. You're really talented-keep writing!