AHH! You have to update ASAP! I wanna know what happens! It's too good to abandon! WRITE WRITE WRITE! P.S. Sorry I haven't reviewed for previous chapters. I was reading the first, forgot to review because I wanted to know what happened. And then chapter two, then three, four, five, etc. UPDATE SOON!

Yay! I really love this story and I hope you update regularly! A very interesting plot and great characters. Don't leave me hanging for much longer!
Peach-chan

Oh wow! How i'd love to be on that beach eating as many chocolate sundaes as I want and not gaining a pound; without the threat of dying of course, and without the creepy demon guy, poor Corrie. Didn't have time to read the rest but will do. Sounds like a really interesting idea. So are all people in comas taken to a strange place or is it just her? Oh well, guess I'll find out soon. Cheers for your review by the way, it's great to get advice i can actually do something with rather than people just saying they liked the story or whatever. Anyway I'm no good at giving advice myself so just keep up the good work and I'll read the rest soon. :)

Aww...sort of. I don't get it. But I am probably not meant to. That would ruin the surprise-ee-os...

Ooh...the suspense! Great chapter, even though it was a bit short... It leaves me confusitcated even more so than I usually am (which is saying a LOT) and I can hardly wait for the next installment!

Eh, it's kind of the Jesus thing. I kind of meant it as an "insert your own metaphor on the dotted line" thing, but I do see that comparison. Actually, if you go through this thing, it's full of religious stuff. I might have gone overboard a bit. Still, I'm glad you liked it! (Yay!)

Oh NO! Poor Corrie... Um...about the spike-things, is that metaphorical for when Jesus was crucified? Very VERY good! I literally cannot wait for the next chapter! _ But alas, I shall have too... T_T

Hey, no worries, I know who you are MQX#...or whatever it is. And as for the cross, that's next chapter (I shouldn't tell you that, cuz you know how I love to keep you all in suspense, but I'm excited to write it...)
;) COTCW

Oh no...poopies. I really want to know what happens when Rian finds out about the cross! Eep. Very good chapter, though. And I'm ocacaoo, cicatrice, whatever, with yet another pen name. Aghain, good good chapter, hope for more soon, but no pressue (especially with impending SCHOOL)!

Great story so update soon.

Great chapter! My only complaint is that I want more! _

This is another vundabar chapter! KEP GOOIING!

This seems like a mystery story or something... to me, at least. I wanna know how they 'feed' off women...! _ I mean, do they suck out their brains or something? Is that why Liz can't form sentences? Is stupid? Or really just incredibly, unhealthily nervous? Can't wait for the next chapter, but no pressure, 'cause pressure su x...

haha, benheyso Corrie, to lazy for my norm reviews, so keep this up it kicks ass beeotch ((the good way))

Thank you for your review, I do appreciate critisim. Although, I do disagree with the fact the you don't like how Rine was so forgiving towards the Germans. I believe, that when you are filled with hatred towards certain people, that somehow they have won. I was trying to convey, that sometimes, we can overcome that, and rise above our tormentors. I didn't want Rine to die filled with hatred and rage. I wanted her to go with hope, and humanity, therefore overcoming the horrible actions that were done to her, and those around her. Thank you though -I am not angry or anything, just want to tell you my point of view.
Lore :)