Reviews for Inner Child
Frostany chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
This was a really well written piece. It was an interesting take on a subject that is often written about these days by people who don't really know what it's like. You seemed to really know what it's like. I liked the way the last line of the two sections tied them both together. That worked really well.
Alex chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
this is amazing! i've read most of your stuff and i intend to read it all. Your style of writing is so diffrent to others and addictive. Keep writing and i'll keep writing reveiws :P x
paper dolls chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
's all I can ...brilliant.
ezyret chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
wow. short and powerful. the second makes me feel like it is ana who killed the girl. very interesting. good idea.
Pineapple River chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
wow! that was really good! i also loved how it was written in the "you" POV thing..i forget what that is called but that is a hard to do but you did it very well..than you wrote in third person and did that perfectly as well...awsome job! keep writing!