Reviews for The Person Who looks Like Me
Dana chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
I get this one, cause well you know why. In a strange way thinking back it probally is an accurat description of some feelings at the time
Hangman chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Reviewing another one of your poems again :P.
Umm.. with this poem, its quite good. Actually I cant fault it other than:
1) the subject matter which seems a little vague. Maybe its overdramatized since you talk about anger and crying and all this is about is a girl looking like her grandma.
2) One of the paragraphs doesnt rhyme, which seems a little out of structure seeing as all of them rhyme. Anyway, good work.
Cam.