Reviews for Look Closer
PaganScribe chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Great.
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Avory chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
Absolutely gorgeous! You brilliantly expressed the frustration with ignorant prejudices against the wonderful Wiccan religion. Incredible diction. Beautiful, fluid rhyme scheme. You, my dear, are a fabulous poet!
aulliana chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
This carries a great message and I love the ending, but your meter was off in a couple of places. It could just be me, but take a closer look at lines 4 and 11. They were the only ones that seemed to have a problem. But overall, it's really a nice piece. Blessed be!
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 3/31/2004
This was just beautiful. I'm not actually Wiccan, but I have some friends who are, so I can appreciate what you're saying. Wonderful job! You might want to check out a friend of mine on here. Her name is Angel_Assasin. She has quite a few stories and poems about Wicca. Anyways, I really love this poem and am now adding it to my Favorite Stories List!
AmethystPisces chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Absolutely wonderful and speaks the truth. Bravo!
Keriana Williams chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
*claps* Very good. I liked it. Both generalized and personal. Has a good message, too. I like it. (And I'm Christian. Figure THAT one out. _)