Reviews for Confusions
Something Corporate chapter 1 . 3/21/2004
I Like it...I like it alot...no but seriously this was very good...For what it's worth it made me feel a little less alone in this world...I didn't know there was any real talent in Canada...Come on now...Celion and Avril will rule the world some day with Sum 41 as there vice president's...anyway again this was truley a work of art
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
The first stanza is well written, one of the best pieces in the poem. Nice images portrayed and good piece of poetry all around.
Jenna xx
EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Damn that was good. Save a few spelling mistakes which I'm sure were...well mistakes. I like the depth to this, it was beautiful! I just hope you're okay...cause you seemed like one confused little lad. Take care, great job, and good luck.
Love,
A-Light-From-Your-Darkness
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Beautiful. You captured me with the first line. Great job!