Reviews for The Daydreamer
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
True... I like this... It has this free feeling... great rhymes... well done...
K. Evenstar chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
Thanks for the reviews.
I really like this poem. The rhyme scheme is different in stanza 2 (couplets) - is that deliberate? Maybe you could make it into a song and have that as a chorus. Just an idea.
origamikitty chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
Nice use of imagery and good flow. It brought a smile to my face. Please r&r some of my work sometime if it isn't too much trouble. I'm not logged in, but my username is origamikitty.