Reviews for If Only They Knew
inactiveaccountz chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Nyeh! Very sad...(not the poem, the topic :p)...the poem was good, nice rhyming.
Trinka chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
I love the lines, "The life i wish i had/Is the life they think i've got." How true is that for so many people? It's true for me, and i'm sure many of my friends too. This is such a great poem! I love it. Keep up the good work!
Luv Always,
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
That's incredibly sad. I loved the first and last stanzas. Beautifully written, you conveyed the emotion in each this one very well. Keep up the great work!
Anat Qetesh chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
this is sad, very well put,you put i wish i has, do you mean wish i had? anyway wonderfully put, looking forward to anyother poems you write.