I love it. So great and creative

chocoberry i really like this story and i wish you would continue it even though it's been at least 8 years since u updated did something happen to you? well anyways thx for the beginning of a great story chow:)

can't stop reading

I like it already. It makes me sad to think about how badly people treated slaves. Please update soon.

heh, well, so much for that...your last update was in 05 :/

gah! i love this story so far. you have done such a good job of showing the mind of a six-year-old! very very good so far. cant wait till the next chapter! :)

Very nice! I like Caroline's innocence. I look forward to reading more!

this is pretty cool. update soon!

Dude, you totally have to finish

I like it, I've hunted around and haven't found a good story like this. So needless to say great job and hope to read more great chapters!

Awesome story. I like reading these kind of stories. Most likely it's because of Holes, with Katherine and Sam. Ooh so cute. Have a great day! Can't wait until the next update!

Please continue. I also like to read about interracial couples when such things were frowned prohibited. I always like it when people buck the trends and do whats right. This could get very interesting. But, I think it could use a few more descriptions. Maybe facial expressions, body language, air quality. You know, anything to make the story more real. Thats about all I can say for improvement. Please write more.

I really like this so far and I can't wait till John and Caroline grow up. Please update as soon as you can!

Really interesting story so far. I love Caroline's naiveness toward everything, it really identifies to a girl her age. On to chapter 2!

that's a great beginning, please continue