Reviews for Yes, Miss Caroline
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
I love it. So great and creative
pinkanimelvr10 chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
chocoberry i really like this story and i wish you would continue it even though it's been at least 8 years since u updated did something happen to you? well anyways thx for the beginning of a great story chow:)
anon chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
can't stop reading
Sushay1221 chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
I like it already. It makes me sad to think about how badly people treated slaves. Please update soon.
jessica chapter 2 . 6/27/2010
heh, well, so much for that...your last update was in 05 :/
jessica chapter 2 . 6/27/2010
gah! i love this story so far. you have done such a good job of showing the mind of a six-year-old! very very good so far. cant wait till the next chapter! :)
starsprinkles9604 chapter 2 . 10/17/2009
Very nice! I like Caroline's innocence. I look forward to reading more!
littlewolf123 chapter 2 . 4/24/2007
this is pretty cool. update soon!
Writing4Eternity chapter 2 . 10/11/2006
Dude, you totally have to finish
Falcon chapter 2 . 5/20/2006
I like it, I've hunted around and haven't found a good story like this. So needless to say great job and hope to read more great chapters!
Blackcat69 chapter 2 . 12/9/2005
Awesome story. I like reading these kind of stories. Most likely it's because of Holes, with Katherine and Sam. Ooh so cute. Have a great day! Can't wait until the next update!
Tiryns chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
Please continue. I also like to read about interracial couples when such things were frowned prohibited. I always like it when people buck the trends and do whats right. This could get very interesting. But, I think it could use a few more descriptions. Maybe facial expressions, body language, air quality. You know, anything to make the story more real. Thats about all I can say for improvement. Please write more.
S. Renee chapter 2 . 1/14/2005
I really like this so far and I can't wait till John and Caroline grow up. Please update as soon as you can!
S. Renee chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
Really interesting story so far. I love Caroline's naiveness toward everything, it really identifies to a girl her age. On to chapter 2!
Seixe chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
that's a great beginning, please continue
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