Reviews for Fukai Mori
jevn chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
This was not a bad story. I like how you showed Edelyn's fear before a crowd. What I didn't like so much was that from the beginning of the story, I knew Edelyn was going to win. Also, the song she was singing being all in Japanese was sort of annoying since I had no idea what any of the lyric's were.