It's 3 am and in crying. What a beautiful story you have written. I'm in love with the love that Greg and Conner share. It's so beautiful. And so well written. I loved the pace and everything was so realistic. At first I was a little bit skeptical of how intense they were at 14/15 but in the grand scheme of things it all just made sense. I love this story and you've done an amazing job !

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해서는 안 되므로 인상을 그리며 찌푸린다. “잘 됐네. 크리스털 사기도 귀찮은데 다 복사 방지라 귀한데 풀고 재활용해야지. 흠흠! 좋아.” ‘도둑들은 이미지 크사당건마방,서대문건마걸,구로건마검색리스털 내용을 모름이 분명하군.’ 라고 생각하고 안심하는 킬라. 크리스털의 내용을 확인하려면 영상 재생 마법 진이 새겨진 석판이 필요하다. 6서클 대법사가 도둑들을 상대로 마법 진을 공들여 한 달간 석판에 새겨 줄 리 만무하다. 그리고 도둑들도 호기심은 가지만 필요 없사당건마방,서대문건마걸,구로건마검색는데 돈 쓸 이유가 없다. 크리스털 대부분이 귀족을 위한 난잡한 성교나 사생활 엿보기이므로 별 관심 없다. 게다가 장물로서도 위험하다. 영상속의 내용을 토대로 단방에 역추적 당할 수 있는 위험이 있다. 그런 걸 킬라가 처리 해준다하자 마법 배낭을 아깝지만 재빨리 손 사당건마방,서대문건마걸,구로건마검색털고 빨리 킬라를 내 보내고 싶은 마음이 가득한 길마다. “그럼 그 사기꾼들은?” “옙! 체념한 듯 백작님의 처분만 기다리고 있습죠.” “좋아! 마법 배낭과 내용물 그리고 두더지 놈들을 영주 관으로 보내 주게. 간만에 고문 실습 좀 해야겠어. 역시 고문의 손맛은 오크보다 사람이사당건마방,서대문건마걸,구로건마검색야. 영지에는 죄수들을 광산에 죄다 데려가 실습 대상을 찾을 수가 있어야지. 아아, 고문 술은 나의 또 다른 취미라네. 에딘에서 통쾌하게 놀아 볼까! 흐흐, 기대되는군. 한 놈도 아니고 6놈이라…. 한 한 달은 가지고 놀 수 있겠구나. 카카카!” 킬라가 살기를 피우며 기괴하게 사당건마방,서대문건마걸,구로건마검색웃으며 죄수들에 깊은 관심을 표하자 부르르 진저릴 치는 길마와 두꺼비. 둘 다 킬라가 주관하는 고문대에 붙들려 있는 상상을 한다. ‘정말 변태 새끼구나. 어디서 이런 괴물을 데려와서 두꺼비 두고 보자.’ 속으로 이를 가는 길마다. 사실 어린나이에 도둑 길드 길마가 된 쏭 사당건마방,서대문건마걸,구로건마검색마담의 완력이나 실력이 킬라보다 못한 건 아니다. 귀족이라는 배경과 그에 못지않은 악평, 결정적으로 주점 안에서의 침묵적 소란, 게다가 오줌을 질기며 부들거리는 두꺼비 때문에 길마로서의 당당함은 사라지고 킬라에게 초반부터 압도된 것이다. 압도된 상태에서의 고사당건마방,서대문건마걸,구로건마검색압적 태도와 강렬한 투기에 당하자 별 생색도 못 내고 킬라가 사기당한 돈에, 노획한 아티팩트에, 죄수들까지 일사

I honestly don't know what Greg told Clarissa he was gay. Probably the most stupid thing I've seen him do, and he doesn't really strike me has a dull-witted person. Sometimes I feel like he is set up to totally be disrespected by Clarissa and not defend himself against that. On top of that, he actually acted and continues to act quite pathetic in front of her. Sometimes I feel like he has no backbone. :/ I don't understand why he never stood up for himself in front of her even before he dumbly admitted to her that he was gay.

But anyway, this story is quite beautiful regardless, especially Connor's POV. It's been a long time since this story was posted, but I felt like reviewing anyway. Even if no one reads it. Ha.

That was so good D
I stumbled upon your story yesterday, and I'm so glad I did :D
It was great!

Please tell me there is a sequel coming :( Just finished this to find it is years old and the sequel never came :( Praying the author still visits this site, and has access to the reviews etc. Never read a fic that i've been so involved in and actually had tears falling from my eyes! Loved it. Please come back and give us a taste of Conner and Gregs life together now

Wow. I've just stumbled accross this story yesterday. I'm currently in the process of reading it at my spare time in work.. I just finished chapter 19, and I have tears streaming down my face at my desk! thats deep. I'm enjoying this so much, and cant wait to continue to read... I'm praying the entire ending wont make me as sad as the end of this chapter did! Good job so far, and i'm sure i'll comment again further through the chapters!
Adam

OH MY GODDD I LOVE THISSSS!

I was kinda hoping Greg's going to have some closure with his father. But oh well XD

Out of their friend, my favorite is definitely Tom XD Despite his stupidity, I think he's a very interesting character. I like him.

I'll be waiting for the sequel you promised... even if it took 10 more years from now. lol

Wow... That was so wonderful. It's one of the best homosexual stories I've read. A beautiful story.

First story to make me go awwww

Very nice first chapter

this story was just absolutely awesome...

i have to say, I really enjoyed reading this story. Conner was just so... so cool. :)

That was incredible. Are you writing any other stories similar or any others that you already have?

loved it ,read this thru in two days .such a wonderful story .I was so happy that they ended up together .I just wish that Greg's family could have come around in the end but his father was a bit too full of himself to ever bend .They were fine without him anyway (I can not imagine turning my back on my child).

this story has lots of potential as far as plot goes! but gregory's point of view really needs to be worked on, the way you had him narrate was unrealistic and juvenile. he's eighteen, he can do better than stereotype his entire family as close-minded and with noses stuffed so full of old money they cant breath, and if gregory and conner are having so much sex, someone would at least be suspicious of their relationship. Also, when your changing point of view, please at least italicize, bold, underline, do SOMETHING to show the change of character. otherwise it gets confusing.

keep writing!

Absolutley heart breaking...i actually cried, like

Great chapter