O.O! *has a heart attack*

((Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.))

And they finally meet! It's just too bad that we didn't get to see them actually conversing with eachother. I can't wait for the next chapter, because that was an evil cliffhanger.

OMG! How evil is this cliff hanger? Though...I kind of suspected that it would end somewhat like this. XDD Oh please update soon! The suspense is going to kill me if I dno't find out what happens next!

oh, god...god, god, god, god, god.

there are no words to describe this moment...ah. it was absoluytely wonderful! bliss...i cat wait to see thheir reactions...oh, god. i really hope you update soon, otherwise, i wont be able ot handle it. great job, btw! it was bloody wonderful! i love how camerons all, "should i tell him?" it was hilarious how he kept him waiting. on that note, UPDATE!

very emotional chapter, i couldnt stop reading it, not even the noise mi sister was making could distract me! imm just wondering how youre going to carry that on :) im waiting for the next chappie!

Great chapter!You're so MEAN!How could you live the chapter just there! T_TI have been waiting the moment they talk for ages! :'(Now, please KEEP writing!Hope to see the next chapter pretty SOON!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

OMG! I am so close to tears right now! OMG! This is just so freakin' exciting! OMG! How could you put a cliff-hanger (type thing) here? Of all places why now? *takes deep breath*- I don't think I took a breath that entire chapter! OMG! *urges self not to cry*. WOW! I can't believe they can actually see each other! You so have to update really really soon! Like now, right now, sit and write! I don't care if you're busy! Conner and Greg need you! OMG! Please don't leave me hanging for too long- mainly 'coz I'm not breathing properly! Ek! This is just so fabulous! They love each other! YAY! OMG! YAY! I don't have many coherent sentences atm! Sorry I didn't review the chapters seperately! I just wanted to read what was going to happen! Whoo to Mel! She's such a sweety! Awesome chapters! *grumbles about lack of breath and cliff-hanger*! Other than that not problems! How could there be when this is just so amazingly fantastic? I love it! I love them! I love it all soo much! I don't think you can understand how much I love this story! Ok,I probably should stop writing now, I've wasted enough of your precious wrtiting time *hint hint*. LOVED IT! UPDATE REALLY SOON! PLEASE! *takes another deep breath*

OH MY GOD, HOW COULD YOU DO THAT! I love you and I'M DYING HERE! I'm being made fun of for indesipherable noises at the computer -.- They just don't understand. -dies- This chapter was amazing by the way. You've been in fast forward for a while. I love this chapter. I'm beyond screaming. I'm dead. ..Haha. -.-

I really love this story. I hope you update soon, which i know you will do P

YEAH! They've seen each other! Now they need to kiss and make up! lol Update soon! : )

*Brandishes a butchers knife screaming* Oh My God! squee _ Oh but how could you leave us hanging? T.T You know I still love you though. But Oh my freaking God! I love you, love you love you. Oh update soon. Please please please...

ARGH! talk about cliffhangers! i thought i was great at that...but this is the ultimate! i've never wanted to read something more than right now! oh please update soon!

argh! i hate you! all chapter long my heart was beating so fast... i was almost as nervous as they were... and then you leave us on a cliffhanger? its so not fair. i want the rest of it... i think the suspense will kill me... no but seriously, to be fair, this chapter was incredibly well done... tha anxiety and the nervousness of the characters was truly well portrayed... and the end was so... so cliffhangie... but dramatic... and somewhat magic. i can just picture them standing in the rain... hell, i can feel their wonder at seeing the other right in from of them... really well done. but now write the next one so we're not stuck on that... ive got a life, i dont need to always wonder about what what is going to happen next... well actually i dont mind that much... but i still want the rest of the story... or at least another chapter so were not left hanging... or at least that we're not left hanging on a very steep cliff(if youre intent on having a cliffhanger at the end of the next chapter...). im shutting up now. i just wanted you to know this is awesome. keep writing.

Ah! Just... Ah!

Finally! I'm so glad they finally exchanged some kinda of interdaction. It took you a while to update, but thats ok, cause this chapter made up for it. Can't wait for them to actually meet. Domo arigato.