Reviews for Love and Secrets
eighteen hundred chapter 18 . 8/30/2004
Aw... Poor Conner... Update
depressedbrokenheart chapter 18 . 8/30/2004
he's not gonna see greg anymore... *sniffle*... what a horrible thing to say!
writers-tenshi chapter 17 . 8/26/2004
I thought I reviewed this, but it's not in my review history. .
Anyway, please continue! This is getting nerve-racking, I want them to be back together! Onegai (please)! Continue!
depressedbrokenheart chapter 17 . 8/24/2004
awesome! i love this story. not really diggin the conner leaving part but i know that they'll get back together because of the first chappie! lol. anyways keep going. i love it!
eighteen hundred chapter 17 . 8/21/2004
Awesome... I lke how real Greg seems now, cause at the beginning he was kind of an ass, but now he's relatable and stuff... Um... yeah... Update soon
Stefen chapter 17 . 8/19/2004
Aw! That was so sad! Gregory is such a sweetie! I feel so bad for him. Connor needs to get his act together!
Giulietta chapter 17 . 8/19/2004
I have always read but never sent a review (sorry!), but this time I have to. Beautiful chapter. It's so difficult to really penetrate a character, to say something relevant without being obvious or trivial; and especially suicide is a very hard subject... But your prose is light and desperate at the same time, your sarcasm makes it all more tragic without falling in soap-opera cliché. It sounds... real, non artificial nor pathetic, if you understand what I mean. In other words, I love it, for what it's worth. (sorry for my english...)
Tin Whistle chapter 17 . 8/19/2004
I love it. Please continue soon, and please make them happy again!
Tropical-sandstorm chapter 17 . 8/18/2004
damn that was sad. really, you need to get these twoback together, at leasdt within the next couple chapters.
amateur-writer chapter 17 . 8/18/2004
good writing... some spelling mistakes.. probably just typos... it is very realistic.. a lot of emotion.. keep it up... i think that the problems keeping coming at greg and conner so you should try something new... keep the readers interested.. just a suggestion.. good work so far
Betsy chapter 17 . 8/18/2004
OMG, what an amazing story...this is the first story I have read on fiction press and I am so glad I did. I have read all the chapters...and as a result I haven't been able to do my homework (I have been that caught up in your story). Keep it up! P.S I almost cried when Conner
redredredred chapter 17 . 8/17/2004
really good! are you plannign on making conner come back tho?
samalane chapter 17 . 8/17/2004
I have to say that I absolutly love it. I love the way your expressing their emotions, and showing how hard it is for them to have a relationship like that. Not that I would know what it's like but, you know...
Also you seem to be doing a very good jod on describing all the places and towns in Canada. are you Canadian? I was just wondering, anyway, enough with my ramblings, update soon,
-aqua seafoam shame
ddz008 chapter 17 . 8/17/2004
I thought he was actually going to commit suicide! T_T
But that something was going to stop him and he would be sick or something like that.
But well, the important thing is that he is ALIVE!
Hope to see him and Conner together again... I would like to see what's happenning in Conner's mind in the summer.
Keep writing, please!
Lovely story!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
I am no longer writing chapter 17 . 8/17/2004
wow.. I cried. wow.. this is beautiful work..
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