so good. and original. somehow, it seems different from other fictions. it seems more profound and more life-wise. great job.

Amazing ending to a truely amazing story. You are very talented and I absolutely adored the characters and plotline that you came up with in this work. They were great. Brilliant work. :)

I almost cried relizing that this, this chapter was the end to this amazing story. If I've said it once then I've said it a million times. I love your work. I really do hope you keep your word and make more stories for them. They're (Conner and Greg)are just this amazing pair you've made and they seem so realalistic. So much that even I was able to relate to them on so many diffrent levels.

There are no words... but I'll try anyway. It was beautiful, elegant, and moving. You have a fantastic style of writing. Please write a sequel.

Take care,Emily

AW. (crap it's over). Loved it. I know that whatever I write in this review will not do this amazing story justice... so I don't think I should even try! But I just wanted to let you know that this is the most amazing story I have yet thus far on fictionpress, and probably ever! It's just full of emotion that you can't help but fall in love with it! The characters you created fitted with one another perfectly! I love Conner and Greg, they're amazing (i need a new word).

I really do hope that you continue writing. I'll sure as hell keep reading.

Sorry for the bad review.

Loved every moment of it- even the moments that made me want to throw the computer through the window because Conner and Greg weren't together. haha. loved it. You're amazing. keep it up!

Thank you so much for this story!

this cant be an end! i want to see his parents die a horrible death for being the condescending, prejudice morons that tthey were. gr...i hate them. *sighs* did i add that this was fabulous, and i absolutely loved it? it was an ALMOST perfect ending-the onlly way it could be better would be if his parents fell of their high horse and broke their necks in the process. *grins* but anyway, awesome chapter, i really did love how you ended it. it was touching, honest, perfect. *grins* real, i guess, is what it is. its not that fairy tale crap, "oh, we have the pefect life, we make tons of money, live in a mansion", that kind of crap. or like in pretty woman how he gets back at his dad by buying his company and splitting it up into little pieces jsut to feel better about himself. *grins* sorry, i'm rambling. anywayz, great job...i adored this story,a nd was constantly looking forward to your updates-actually, in the car today, i sat for a good 20 minutes and wondered how everything would work out. *girns* anwyay, bubyes, and goodluck on all your future stories, not that you'll need it!~dreamerdoll

AW, what a sweet ending. I can't believe how this story went so far. From their lives in Oakland Academy is 14 year olds, to 19 year olds living on their own. This story came a long way...and I don't think 43 chapters is enough of those two. I would love to see some more of them!

*sniff sniff* i can't believe it's really over. that's like the saddest thing ever! i will mis it soo much, but i can assure you that i will reread it over and over! lol! and why didn't you email me back... i really needed your help... oh well. thanks for making my day by posting this! :)

yay! kool story! shame its ended :( hope u start writing a sequel soon, thing is youeve left the end for a sequel or just leaving it, but also uve left potential for a seqquel bout ne thing really! woo!

Wow. That was such a nice ending. It almost made me cry.

OH NO, what am I going to do? ::wails:: it's over!

Well, this was aweomse story. I reall really admired, how you wrote Greg and Conner. How, their emotions were realistic, it wasn't cliche-dramatic. It was very well written.

I really think, that if you wanted to, you could get this published. It's well written, I think it'd do good.

Anywaysm good luck with future writing pieces, and I'll be reading your work,

I sincerely hope that Matt's dad can help them out. I couldn't really believe that someone's family would throw them out like that, and without a single tear shed. I really can't believe they gave no thought concerning the happiness of their own kid, but just cared about the dough he'd reap in and the pride and honor he'd bring to tghe family. It's sickening because they won't be able to say or keep a thing after they die, but they'll just live miserable lives without a kid. Kinda like what they been doin' all along.

msn,just got back from camp and WHOOHOO! there's another chapter! but, if i had more energy, man, i would've cried! why did he do that! how can he just... ah! i can't stand it. it's an amazing story, you put so much emotion into it, it's just ... idk, i'm speechless. it's wonderful. it means so much to me and gives me so much hope.

*hugz*Krys

My God...I hate Greg's parents. I hope what Conner said to them last put SOME sense of guilt upon them, that way they can live with it for awhile :PAnyway, awesome friends they have, just like mine

that was an awesome chapter as usual. i can't wait till you're next update, also as usual... i'm very sad that it's coming to an end though... hm...

Greg's father is a bastard! How could someone disown their child. At least Greg has Conner.. Update soon! : )