Great storyline so far, please continue!Emerald :)

I like this so far, don't know if you are planning on writing more but if you are it would be good.

Wow, very… interesting to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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well writen, you can feel the atmosqpere of the group, the tension for the games...

Nice. Interesting twist on the vampire mythology. The witch vs. vampire thing sort of reminds me of In the Forests of the Night, but not by much. This is going on my favorites.

Ohh, interesting. I like the character development you have here. It could use a little more scenery description, but it's pretty good the way it is.
happy hunting,
~Midnight Predator~

I piked your story randomly, the summary looking promising, and it was. I liked it very much, but I'd love to know what happens next... The way you take the different caracters point of view is interesting. well, waiting for the rest of the story. gd bye