Reviews for My Heart Skips A Beat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great and cute the repetition of the heart beats works really well. I love how you ended it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ou so cute lol. It's short, but that's ok, sometimes a lot of words just ruins the effect. Great job! -Zephyr Zaelza |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's the story? i know you said short story, but THAT short? meaningful, but still, it coulda used a few more lines, or at least a few moe words :P. lol. Peace and Chicken Grease |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! This is so CUTE! I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A STORY! OMG A STORY! I TOTALLY DIDN'T KNOW THERE WAS A STORY HERE! ACK I LOVE IT! IT'S SO CUTE AND SWEET AND ACK A STORY! Ok, I'm calm. See? I knew you'd be good at stories! Write more, okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It made me smile...you were right, it was quite cute. I really find it's beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is cute story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so cute! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, Very cute! You said this was half true, half fantasy. Was him saying "hi" the fantasy? Keep Writin' ~ Alexz Lynn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww it's so cute... You're awsome at writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw- NICE! i love it. i like the repetition and then change. this is an awesome poem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute and sweet! And have I mentioned very suspenseful? Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! I loved it! That was awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that works more like a poem, but I suppose the sentences were too long to classify it as such. Still, the effect was the same and that's not saying it's not good; if anything, it was, indeed, cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh..my heart skips a beat or two...or three. This is certainly what I would do if a guy followed me like that. Especially if he had blue eyes. Blue eyes make me m-e-elt. *grins* I like this...so suspensful. |