Reviews for My Heart Skips A Beat
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Great and cute the repetition of the heart beats works really well. I love how you ended it.
Zephyr Zaelza chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Ou so cute lol. It's short, but that's ok, sometimes a lot of words just ruins the effect. Great job!

-Zephyr Zaelza
Chris Taylor chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
that's the story? i know you said short story, but THAT short? meaningful, but still, it coulda used a few more lines, or at least a few moe words :P. lol.

Peace and Chicken Grease
Violet Blues chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
Aw! This is so CUTE! I love it.
kit feral chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
A STORY! OMG A STORY! I TOTALLY DIDN'T KNOW THERE WAS A STORY HERE! ACK I LOVE IT! IT'S SO CUTE AND SWEET AND ACK A STORY! Ok, I'm calm. See? I knew you'd be good at stories! Write more, okay?
nesy chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
It made me smile...you were right, it was quite cute. I really find it's beautiful.
Dakota Alexus chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
this is cute story.
crybabekrizz chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
this is so cute! ;)
Alexz Lynn chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Aw, Very cute! You said this was half true, half fantasy. Was him saying "hi" the fantasy? Keep Writin'
Alexz Lynn
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Aww it's so cute... You're awsome at writing!
sheZadey chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
aw- NICE! i love it. i like the repetition and then change. this is an awesome poem
philoslove chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Cute and sweet! And have I mentioned very suspenseful? Great work!
SoccerGal chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
AW! I loved it! That was awesome.
chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
I think that works more like a poem, but I suppose the sentences were too long to classify it as such. Still, the effect was the same and that's not saying it's not good; if anything, it was, indeed, cute.
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
ooh..my heart skips a beat or two...or three. This is certainly what I would do if a guy followed me like that. Especially if he had blue eyes. Blue eyes make me m-e-elt. *grins* I like this...so suspensful.
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