Reviews for Life And Destiny Aren't All That Bad |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() hey...i missed an update! you can i do that when i have you in my author alerts? oh well...i liked the "i despise you" "i semi-despise you" part. that was funny! and they're gonna have equal power too! well, kinda equal..it's good enough. Aw! well, they say opposites attract! (not that i believe in that all that much) hmm...i think her muteness(is that a word?) gives a special side to her, but it would be a lot easier to have her be able to speak, for both the character and the author, i'm sure. whatever you decide will be fine, and i'm sure you can write both ways, so i have no opinion really. whatever helps the story! |
![]() ![]() Still awesome! I can't wait until her muteness is gone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi me again piper already had a premonition tuntuntun... Anyway great chappie can't wait for more update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... I liked the chapter though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so much. It's so interesting and heartrending. It's definitely a favorite. Man, I wanna read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'tis a bit rough, but i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() still nice! Continue soon I think you should get rid of her muteness it would me easier to add more powers! update, I'll be reviewin! |
![]() ![]() YES YES YES YES! That would be awsome! I can't wait! This was a very intresting chapter with loads of development! Keep up the exelent work! |
![]() ![]() I love the story, I can't wait to read Chapter Two! |
![]() ![]() Okay this is a really good story but the guardins of the guardians is confusing. I CONFUSED, FUSED for short Well anyway good story PLEASE UPDATE |
![]() ![]() i like your story! hope u post soon..and yea i've read mars b4 it's good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its not to bad given the fact that you appear, in your style, to be a new wrriter and it a borderline fanfic... |
![]() ![]() Just an fyi anime and amnga are singular and plural because in japaneese there is no plura, instead you would say 2 book 3 book 1 book etc... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! this chapter was great! i also liked the last chapter, jus didn't get to review. well, keep up da good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! the moments of ryo and piper have come! they're so cute! i liked how jesse said how both in life and in books, the couple usually has no idea what's going on, but the whole rest of the world somehow does. and btw, who is Jesse James? author/authoress? i do read quite a lot, yet that name doesn't ring a bell...hmm..oh well. i love MAGIC! and there was a lot of it in this chappie! oh the guardians are from greek mythology aren't they? i love greek mythology, it facinates me. except, what about harpy? i don't think i'm familiar with him...good work, keep it up! _ |