Reviews for Murder
dklfdasjklkdsjioeasjklfds chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Hey, thanks for the encouragement and the favorite. :3 I'd say your poetry is rather amazing, too. I like how your poem has a kind of cold front with mostly just-facts, but below the surface there's a lot of symbolism and emotion, which in itself is symbolic of how that woman would have felt to kill her husband like that. x3; But that's just me, maybe.

Anyway, great job.
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
Wow. Lots of powerful stuff here. Hang on one minor constructive criticism before the good stuff and thats use a spell checker. Sorry its just one or two words like wipped (whipped) are spelt wrong. However, thats really timy so dont worry as this is a really great poem :) The I hat you is so powerful as is the hurt she finally admits to feeling at the end. Lots of strong feelings here well done!