Reviews for Catch a Fallen Star |
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![]() ![]() AHH MOTHERLAND. I love your works, Zezzeh! They're so awesome. I'm... awe-struck. O.O |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was a cool chapter. I like Vare. He seems cool. Uhm.. nothing really to critize. I love the way you write, it's simply wonderful. But.. uhm.. nothing more to say than, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, how I love this story. It's so unbelievably awesome.. Zerah is such an interesting, and wonderful character. The whole plot I adore, and just the way you write.. it's great. I cannot wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() fergot to say before - Now the story is building up with characters and slowing down the timespeed, but the first bit seemed like a prologue? like she grows up entirely too fast - its almost like how they have those newspaper articles on TV to show the important events - not that theyre not good - the events are v good, and the wholething is very well written, just saying its turning into a story now :) where r all your reviewers hiding? . hahah this chapters pretty cute, what with thingum poking thingum and thingum annoying thingum n uh yeah... im afraid ill spell the guys name wrong.. lemme go see - its Glennyn.. yes... ahahh another very well written chapter with great colour magic - i dunno i love those colour/star/elemental/swirling magics... with music and controlled with thoughts n yeah... great stuff so many quotes i could put in here that make this story so good :) too many! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah ok i take that back - its five months :... i think this bits sounds so good ~ "Til." Burn. ah. so beautiful when the demons combust, and very good imagery with the demonic battlefield and how the people can only feel it as *pleasantly cool*... mhmm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() woahoho... excellent story! so far of course.. only on chapter two - yu upload fast! twelve chapters in a week :o! very well written totally fantasy fic - i luv her wings and her hair and her horse... and her sword :) ahh there r so many beautiful rainbowy scenes (yu kno whut i mean :#) oh shez special alright - are the stars her family? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice i cant write that good (Darn) |
![]() ![]() damn thing sent it twice! You may delete the extraneous. |
![]() ![]() Little pig tailed girl sits on rug in the center of a bare room. Her clothes are tattered... The floor is dusty(except in a few streaks that look as if something resembling a small body was dragged across it).. the fire place has long been unused, but charred remains lay half emersed in ash. The little girl appears to be meditating. "I have reverted back to my old name." Comes a small but powerful voice hoarse with disuse. "This review will so kick ass... Excuse the vulgarity." You do. Of course. "This is a spite review. You know what I mean." You do. Of course. If you are Flaming Redhead 13. The girl, Great One, cracks poen her eyes to look upon you through barely noticeable slits. Or she thinks them very unnoticeable. You can tell she's looking at you. But you dont tell her that. "You've grown since I last reviewed, as a writer and a person." She smiles. "You're writing it beautiful... And I need my damned dictionary to read it," she adds, resentful of the vast vocabulary laid down before her within the text. She's goes back to meditation. The review is over. For now. On your way out of Reviewer Realm, Great One sees you eyeing the dustless streak on the floor. You note it's eratic and swurvy path leads to the window. "Fido" she says simply. You gather there was a struggle. "He wasn't too keen on giving my back my old room. Had ot give 'im the boot!" That old psychotic pop-eye look returned to her face full force, and a maniacal grin to match. It's as if she never left. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Zerah, I find that you are a great story writer, and that your descriptions really make the story come to life. The language made(?) in the story is amazing, and all other that I have to say is...keep up the good work. |