Reviews for Campus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() well aren't you the manwhore... jking jking. Atleast you aren't afraid what other people think. Keep up the good work. Your writing is so realistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa. That was so exhilerating. I have no idea what to say. Well first off, I'm glad that you aren't afraid to say that you are gay. Being afraid to say that you are gay is like me being afraid to say im straight. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. You write well. But you could work on re-reading and fixing your errors. and if you would like to... check out my fic. It's pretty good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... That happened to you huh? Nick sure chose an interesting way to... well... um~ Get what he wanted. Though "drugging" you seemed hardly necessary, considering the reaction you had to it. I liked it though. I think it's interesting that you write out things based from your real life. It actually makes the story more intriguing. Yes, and VERY nice descriptions. Though I saw a few errors here and there... but I still understood what was going on and who was doing what. Me like. Good job, YaoiBoy17. -Sakuranbo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was nice and graphic. Well written and well done! I liked it! :) Keep up the boy love and continue writing! Happy trails! |
![]() ![]() ![]() These chapters are based on your own experiences? Damn... They're well written, and I wouldn't mind hearing more. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() you need to write more! those were fuckin awesome! - Jade* |
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![]() ![]() ![]() -Mouth drops open- Wow... That was unexpected. Extra points for you. -Nathan- |
![]() ![]() Hmm... Nicely done. It's awesome that you can be so open with your preferences. *grins* Well great job, mon amie. Serious great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice description there. The sex is very real and stuff, but it sort of loses its reality with the way the plot leads up to it it lacks something. I suppose it might be because its more real than a stroy might be, but you really do make up for it with your description. Bloody nice work, tipper! ::applaudes:: |
![]() ![]() hey, nice experience! i wish i was there i was there to witness it.. :3.. hehehe well anyways it s a very nice story... hope to read more! byebye |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did that actually happen? If it did, wow... It's good that you're not too ashamed to admit your sexuality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() man.. that really happened? THat's pretty hott. I love people who arent' afraid to tell personal stuff. That was pretty cool... your a pretty cool person. I admire that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Good story. I'm adding it to my favorites. Very descriptive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And that really happened to you? Well, Nick has got interesting tactics indeed... A good story so far, but there are a few grammatical errors, and you keep switching between past and present tense, which is quite confusing at times. You know what, drop me a line if you need a beta reader, I enjoyed your writing! |