|Reviews for Don't Leave|
| dklfdasjklkdsjioeasjklfds chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
ohh, I like this poem very much. I think anyone who's been in love for more than a week probably knows this feeling well, and you're good at conveying that voice of desperation without making it seem annoying.
I would like to give some criticism though, just because I'm harsh like that and pick through gritty details all the time.
I'd like there to be a little more depth. This poem definitely tells a story, so I'd like you to hint a bit more at the background of the person speaking, or maybe just add a bit to it. I find the funnest part about poetry is you can cram as much meaning as you like into as few words as possible. That's all, though. You're a very talented writer. :3
| sweetsforthesweet chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
i know how you feel liked it