Reviews for Hidden
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
I love it, except for the 3rd stanza. I thought it was a little off subject, and didn't really flow with the rest of it. But, the other stanzas were great. good job.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
I really liked the broken rhythm of this. It adds to the melancholy tone. Sorry for the short review; it's late. But I really liked this!